The ideas you do express begin to focus on sexuality in the clip. - This is far too brief. Is this honestly what you managed in 45 mins? You need at least 4 ideas for each area. You’ve managed about 4 all together, and some of those are only half-complete. I am seriously concerned. - Remember to focus on SEXUALITY at all times. Your points for Mise en Scene and camera do not. EAA - 6 Eg - 5 T – 5
The ideas you do express begin to focus on sexuality in the clip.
ReplyDelete- This is far too brief. Is this honestly what you managed in 45 mins? You need at least 4 ideas for each area. You’ve managed about 4 all together, and some of those are only half-complete. I am seriously concerned.
- Remember to focus on SEXUALITY at all times. Your points for Mise en Scene and camera do not.
EAA - 6
Eg - 5
T – 5
16/50